Thursday, January 31, 2013

High School Chapter 10: Heart Break And Love

Bret: OH My God...why did I just break up with Derik...
Derik walks into the computer lab Candy is there he sits by her.

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Derik: Candy hey...I uhm....I realized something when I broke up with Bret.
Candy: And what is that? Derik: I like you.
Candy looks at him...


And walks away



Derik runs to catch up with her "HEY WAIT UP"
                                                                                               Candy: What I heard you but listen I just I can't be with you not now...not ever. Derik: Why?
Candy: Because everytime I let someone into my life someone gets hurt and I don't want to hurt you. Derik: Don't worry about that I'm not going anywhere


He kisses her taking her by surprise.

Talia goes to her locker and sees the new kid  named chase by it. Talia: Hi....why are you by my locker new kid...


Chase: Well I wanted to say hi beautiful. Talia blushes- Shut up...

Candy goes to the rest room Talia is also in checking her make up.
Candy: Does your new look come with some girl talk? Talia: Of course! what's going on? Candy: Well so Derik said he liked liked me...and I don't no what to say or do he just broke up with Bret but then Derik kissed me shockingly. Talia: Do what your heart tells you but before didn't he cheat on you with Bret? Candy: Yea...I was trying to forget that....thanks..Talia: Sorry hun...Just remember all the good times like at prom. I know i wasn't there but I heard about it.Candy: Thanks I think I know what my decision is. Candy goes to find Derik

Candy goes to find Derik. He's in the library.


Candy: Listen I think we're meant to be but I don't want to get hurt again so lets take it slow and... Derik runs to her And what?



Candy: Kiss me.








Tuesday, January 29, 2013

High school Chapter 9: Becoming Someone Else

                Trace walks through the doorway                        Tracie walks through the doors with black hair and purple highlights her new clothes looked slutty everyone looks at her.
                               Candy: Omg w                                               hat happen to my bestfriend! Derik: Wow I guess she's taking Dave's death bad we all are terribly sad but than Dave was her boyfriend. Candy: Maybe we should go talk to her....

Then Talia walks in everyone in the room more in shock then ever! Candy: HOLY SHIT.... Derik: Is the whole school changing and we didn't get the invite... Bret: Apperently...well at least she looks pretty now....
                                        Candy looks away and Derik looks at him in disbelief Bret: WHAT.... Derik: Babe...that was just plane rude..
After lunch Derik and Candy go to class Bret is already in the classroom. Derik walks over to him
Derik: Hi babe you okay? Bret: Hi...I'm okay it's just.... come with me we need to talk and no i'm not breaking up with you..






They walk to the lockers. Derik: So what's up? Bret: Can we take a break... Derik: Really ...after you just said "And no i'm not breaking up with you..." Bret: It's not breaking up it's a break! Derik: It's the same thing basically. Bret: I'm sorry It's just I need time to find out who I am... Derik: I get it I'm actually happy I've been having feelings for candy...I don't know why though...
Bret: oh okay I get it... Bret walks away with tears in his eyes I will never be the same person again EVER. He said.







Sunday, January 27, 2013

High School Chapter 8-The Beginning of Heartbreak

The hostage leaves and the police arrest him.

Leaving Derik, Candy, Tracie and Dave behind.

 Derik: Oh My God! Guys we almost died tonight...


Candy: We should all make a promise that we'll be with each other no matter what happens.
Candy: I wonder who it was thought...I should of took of his mask.
Tracie: Deal...she imagines dave still on the floor blood gushing everywhere tears run down her face* she cries out oh my god I can't believe this is happening to me.
Derik: No you where safe not to dave might die but if you would of done that you would of already been dead.
Candy: I know but I kinda think that it's my fault he got stabbed.
Tracie: Candy it's not like you knew the attacker had a knife you were knocked out.
Candy: Yea but before prom..I told him if he ever does something to hurt Tracie I'd kill him BUT I DIDN'T MEAN IT LITERALLY!
Why would you say that! I love him and now...Cell phone rings Tracie Answers
Tracie: Yes this is she....NO! NO! NO!!!!

Tracie Drops to the ground in tears then looks up...He's gone...they did everything they could but the knife went to his heart She imagines his body and then

His body disappears....









Thursday, January 24, 2013

High School Chapter 7: Prom Of Freedom

Candy: OMG WERE GONNA DIE! GunMan: SHUT UP OR I'LL SHOOT BOTH OF YOU! Derik: WHAT DO YOU WANT WITH US!
                  Derik: What do you want with us! GunMan: Well I want you to shut up! and for the little blondie to come over to me. Candy: I'm not going over there... GunMan: 3....2...
                  Candy: OKAY OKAY I'm coming! She cries. And walks over to the GunMan Derik: Be Careful Whispers Derik.
                            All of the sudden she is on the ground knocked out. GunMan: I GOT HER NOBODY MOVE!
                        Tracie whispers: OMG my best friend is going to die! Dave whispers: Just calm down maybe he will let her go soon. Tracie: The only way he's going to let her go is if she's laying dead in his arms.
                  Dave: It's not the only way...Dave runs and jumps toward the gunman
                   The gun man falls to the ground and the gun drops a few feet away. GunMan: That was a bad move kid.
                       All of the sudden Dave feels a sharp pain and blood gushes from his stomach. Dave: AHHHH!!! OH MY FUCKING GOD IT HURTS-Dave blacks out-
                Tracie runs to the scene. Tracie: NOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!! Tears run down her face NOOO!! WHY DID HE HAVE TO DO THAT?! WHY!





                  Candy gets up and is shocked of what just happen. Candy: Maybe he will be alright!. Tracie: If he's not I don't no what I'll do I can't live without him I've been in love with him since 6th grade. Suddenly the gunman slowly gets up and say's OKAY if anyone else tries that you know what will happen.





POLICE WE GOT THE SCHOOL SURROUNDED COME OUT WITH YOUR HANDS IN THE AIR!

   GunMan: FUCK