Sunday, February 3, 2013

Chapter 11 Of High School: Breaking Point


Bret looks at them with tears in his eyes. Bret: why can't that be me with him? Bret walks away and cries like a baby
Candy: After kissing Derik she ask. Have you talked to Bret lately
Derik: No why?
Candy: Just wondering just...can't you two be friends.. Derik: NO! it'd be to weird... Candy: Come on for me? Derik: Really the for me trick...i'm sorry you're just going to have to give me more time. Candy: I get it...Derik: Thanks you for understanding.

Whatever I gotta get to class...she walks away
Talia: I can't believe we been dating for a week already! Chase: I never been this happy before.
Talia: Me neither but before we get serious I need to tell you something. Chase: Okay uhm boy's bathroom? Talia: Uh....no Library after lunch
After lunch they walk into the library
Chase: Okay...what do you want to say?
Talia: I have an eating disorder
Chase: And you're just telling me now...

Talia: I'm sorry I meant to tell you when we first met but I was scared...


Chase it's okay I will never judge you for who you are. Talia: Really? with tears in her eyes. Chase: Really he kisses her on the forehead.
Bret can't take it anymore. He goes up to Derik and punches him in the face Derik falls on the floor and passes out. Bret: THAT'S WHAT YOU GET FOR BREAKING MY HEART YOU HEARTLESS DICK.

                                                                             Candy walks in the hallway and spots Derik on the ground. WHAT DID YOU DO TO HIM! Bret: he had it coming. Candy: OMG HE'S NOT BREATHING! Bret: WHAT! ALL I DID WAS PUNCH HIM IN THE FACE.
Candy calls 911

She say's to Bret you better hope he's going to be okay. Bret runs away

Candy talks to the operator yea ambulance at forks high school please...come as fast as you can















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